Confessor in me, with the breaking dawn
Agreed solemnly, it was days of yore
When last it screamed of the days that were gone
By, inditing works on grudges galore.
Pat I put the pen on paper,
Proudly penning the prose on pulp,
Picking pretty piquant pieces,
Painting prickly pictures profuse.
But each word failed and crashed each verse
And reeked of rot, of boredom stank
Twice it was I tried to rehearse
And twice I choked, and twice was blank.
When I realized of the void in my store,
“Fuck you!” I said, “I’m not going to write anymore.”
6 comments:
I just love this piece..
Have read it like (n+1) times.. :)
Thank you for acquainting your readers to the beauty of the 'chiasmus' !!!
glad!
and now that the blog is open for all, your friends wont have to spell out abuses for not being able to read the bits and pieces of "their story" :)
their story sucks..!! writing that was a big mistake!!
nowhere close to the beauty of your literature :)
oh comeon! dont be irrationally harsh on yourself, particularly on something that required a great emotional commitment and sweat!
so far as the beauty of literature is concerned, let's not judge it by the sheer weight of pomp and rhetoric :D
nice man..\m/
@raju: thanks dude
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