The shrieking quiescence piercing my throat,
Ejaculates a violently pacifying nimbus.
The smoky zephyr rekindles my goad,
My phantom awaits the stalking Succubus.
Doleful stars, scouring the graves,
Snatch the dying flesh of the phaeton.
Lunatic Luna, arousing its slaves,
Calmly hacks the clandestine orison.
Zombies surround me, bathed in mire,
Phoenixes, bewailing their self-destruction;
The brightly dark sables conspire,
Building my pyre, my death construction.
My body, crumbling, so long has hanged,
On poles, fettered amidst the dead.
I wait, foreseeing my doom being planned,
An iron maiden, donning my head.
The Beast arrives, Succubus behind,
With a sanguinary memento, plucked from the bliss
Of surmounting terror. That apocalyptic mind
Chars my lips, giving me, my steaming Kiss.
... And the HELL gleams in MY APOCALYPSE.
7 comments:
hats off.. great work.. specially liked the last stanza..
thanks.
modestly do i accept your applause.
The dominant character of your work here is the uniqueness in expression and words...
i like the theme and the closing.
very well!
no qualms!
modestly do i accept your applause.
Sadly, a little disappointing from your previous compositions.
But then yes the judicious mix of words deserves some applause.
(I know u will accpt the applause modestly..
Its the disappointment, I am waiting to see addressed.. )
If you see a lot of good things happening, shouldn't you leave space for the bad ones.
personal opinions are always respected.
and it is always nice to see healthy and positive criticism.
only if you could point out the faults and the areas of disappointment, i would do my best to improve upon them.
thanks for the little applause.
Now dont be so harsh on yourself,
I respect your work,
"prose or poetry"
and the disappointment is only a reinstatement of the verbal opinion expressed days ago.
I always assume you write happiness in a spectacular way.
Whatever forced you to imagine your death is to be cursed.
And look at the dominant laugh on your face in the pic...
Its symbolic.
:D
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