The time and the place had been eventfully decided. They were to see each other and wishfully, this would be the last time would be “seeing” each other. The act of ignorance and hence the subsequent indifference had dug its lair into their brains. They had taken a severe beating from the tiring exhaustion and the infinite degree of boredom heaped upon them by this mounting strangulation. Both of them were mindful of the other’s infidelity; both of them were aware of the either’s bondage and priorities; both of them pined for independence; both of them had resigned.
The wait was a patient one.
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“You can take my overcoat, if it comforts you.”
Joseph “Droll” was a tall man, though not tall enough to snatch your attention. His three-and-a-half feet torso and an uncannily slender waistline gave a copy-book picture of a eucalyptus. His peaceful face bore not a wrinkle and the tight, pinkish skin gave him the look of a cold, wet lobster. The rat-ish nose was just enough to keep him breathing, and alive. The black in his eyes was black enough to instill a sense of uneasy isolation, and the only feature noteworthy in the whole of his countenance was the breadth, or more accurately, the volume of his “lusty” lips, though it bought him more embarrassment, than it earned him laurels. No wonder, but for his lips, he was not popular among women.
His booming voice beat on her eardrums with the frequency, faster than the thrash she was listening to. For a moment or so, she almost seemed to be toppling from the fence she was straddling. Hurriedly, her supple form regained its composure.
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“Thanks, but I think I am better off on my own,” was the reply. The lady wore a teasingly friendly look, friendlier than he had expected. The rest of her was silently gazing at the steadiness in his steps as he walked past her. Proud as a peacock, wondered she. This was the second time the offered had been refused.
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His thoughts were in total control and more disciplined than the clock, and forcefully led him into the state of semi-unconsciousness. His mind and soul screamed noisily, in perfect octave. The bugle of the clock announced the seventeenth hour of the day. The mélange of the dusk had settled into a sensuous mauve.
But the wait was still on, and a patient one.
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Shifting uneasily, the lady kept quiet.
Before he was done with his 'help', and even before his butts found some ground, her icily cold, ferocious glare conveyed her reply.
4 comments:
Entertaining.
Imagination has been let out and its clear with the exhaustive explanation of the sun, moon and even the flicker of eyes and eyeballs..(Wait,my premises are clear before you begin the analysis for the three explanations)
Funny bhi hai,
most importantly,(and i mean this one), you don't lose the reader (or should I say, the reader does not loose you)
At places(sparse) i think the description was too lengthy.
All in all,
worth the wait..(which continues...)
I am sure you interpreted the idea correctly, but don't you think the plot's left somewhere and incomplete at places?
Nope.
well, the descriptions are at places, lengthy but a patient reader can put up with it..
I know you might be busy a lot(i might as well be wrong)
but its the fourth time i have checked on this link,,
and the question remains the same..
"What happened next?"
P.S:: Please care for ur readers' appetite once you get them so badly addicted.
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